The pouring rain that ran down my face
provided a cover for the tears
I was at an unfamiliar place
to visit someone who I had once known so well.
Deep gashes scarred his wrist
as well as my mind.
I was light headed as he got closer
we hugged, I held on tight.
Go fish had never been so disturbing
I wanted to scream
why would you do this?
But I couldn't.
Instead I held all of the emotion
In the lump in my throat
that burned as I attempted to hold back the tears.
I choked on my words
and when a tear escaped
I quickly wiped it, so no one saw.
I wanted him to come home
to erase everything that had happened
But it wouldn't ever be that easy.
It was not something a 12 year old would forget.
The memories of the past years felt like a lie
chasing him through the tall feathery grass
in the warm summers sun
was a thought impossible to grasp.
How did he end up here
such a carefree boy that once
I had looked up to and wanted to be just like.
I had been wrong, I did not want to be like him.
I was let down
unable to fully understand
why this would happen to someone
who was so loved and talented.
I think this is a perfect title Daisy. And I love, love the lines: "The memories of the past years felt like a lie/chasing him through the tall feathery grass in the warm summers sun..." I also think you took a risk here and it paid off. It makes me feel this moment too which is what good writing is all about.
ReplyDeleteawh daisy, this is really beautiful! you did a great job of using, "little" daisy's voice and you did a perfect job capturing such hard situation. good job!
ReplyDeleteThere is so much emotion in this. The way you mix description, your feelings, the world the way it was. The whole time I was reading it I was pulled in, I could feel the pain.
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