Infinite
It’s
Never a reality. Merely a
Feeling felt
In a fleeting moment.
Noise that
Inspires you
To achieve
Everything you’ve ever dreamed.
Never a reality. Merely a
Feeling felt
In a fleeting moment.
Noise that
Inspires you
To achieve
Everything you’ve ever dreamed.
I like how ambiguous this is, and I think I agree with what it's talking about: small, fleeting moments of inspiration. I also love tiny powerful poems, good job!
ReplyDeleteI love how there are an infinite number of ways to look at this poem - it's short and to the point (whatever that point may be). Nice job. :)
ReplyDeleteI love the set up of this! It says a lot, but it is not long! It's also up for interpretation, and I really like that about this poem!
ReplyDeleteLook at that acrostic! I really like how you took a simple poetry form yet still managed to make something fantastic and meaningful out of that.
ReplyDeleteI love how clever it is, saying something so true in such brevity.
ReplyDeleteThe simplicity of this poem allows it to mean something different for everybody. This makes it a more effective poem.
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