There's a paradox that you have created. By using the word "about", the poem becomes EXACTLY as long as its title, but by using "exactly" the poem becomes ABOUT as long as it title. Speaking in terms of syllables of course. Your combination of wit and laziness is perfect.
welcome to the brotherhood of anti-poets. unfortunately that's only a haiku, which even as an anti-poet is hard to respect, but we can start you as an apprentice and if you work hard you can rise through the ranks and eventually even become an apprentice first class.
I'm so glad Will is keeping track of syllables and Connor is taking you under his wing. Feel officially welcomed into the tribe. Polonious would be honored, I have no doubt.
You cannot write lies and write good poetry. Deceit, abstraction, euphemism: any one of these will doom a poem to the realm of "baffling" or "forgettable," or worse. Good poetry requires precision: if you do not attempt to say, accurately, truthfully, what you feel or see or need, then how will you achieve precision? Poetry means taking control of the language of your life. Poetry names what has been silenced and allows us to understand and articulate our connections to one another and to the world we inhabit. --June Jordan
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There's a paradox that you have created. By using the word "about", the poem becomes EXACTLY as long as its title, but by using "exactly" the poem becomes ABOUT as long as it title. Speaking in terms of syllables of course. Your combination of wit and laziness is perfect.
ReplyDeletewelcome to the brotherhood of anti-poets. unfortunately that's only a haiku, which even as an anti-poet is hard to respect, but we can start you as an apprentice and if you work hard you can rise through the ranks and eventually even become an apprentice first class.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad Will is keeping track of syllables and Connor is taking you under his wing. Feel officially welcomed into the tribe. Polonious would be honored, I have no doubt.
ReplyDeleteYou certainly support your statement of brevity with this "poem".
ReplyDeleteHaha Blake I love this- very truthful and entertaining.
ReplyDeleteBeing lazy is the best
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