WOW..so few words can describe what I just read. Despite the brevity, this poem screams out your voice. It is who you are and be proud of it and besides its hilarious.
You cannot write lies and write good poetry. Deceit, abstraction, euphemism: any one of these will doom a poem to the realm of "baffling" or "forgettable," or worse. Good poetry requires precision: if you do not attempt to say, accurately, truthfully, what you feel or see or need, then how will you achieve precision? Poetry means taking control of the language of your life. Poetry names what has been silenced and allows us to understand and articulate our connections to one another and to the world we inhabit. --June Jordan
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Deep Frank.. Real deep.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Tim.. I was deeply moved by this.
ReplyDeletehahah I love it.
ReplyDeleteThis is truly moving Frank.
ReplyDeleteman, you're really gifted when it comes to rhyming
ReplyDeletei love you Frank!
ReplyDeleteWOW..so few words can describe what I just read. Despite the brevity, this poem screams out your voice. It is who you are and be proud of it and besides its hilarious.
ReplyDeleteThis was raw Frank. You may just be the greatest human alive.
ReplyDeleteSo touching...
ReplyDeleteI think you should print this on a tee-shirt and sell it. Clearly you are the voice of this generation.
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